March 19, 2006

Anniversary

Mars drinks
from the hollow
of a young man’s life.

5 Comments:

Blogger Borut said...

This is ‘energetic formula’. Not that I’m not aware of it (most of the time). Just today, I went through an experience described by your words. As I see it, your potent poem marks the end of the era of Mars the Monster. At least for me. Thanks.

11:51  
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

wow! very nice!

20:59  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

I see ambition and aspiration from the gaze to the night sky!! Love this one!!

05:20  
Blogger Fio said...

nice site

05:31  
Blogger Pragmatician said...

quite deep, although I never knwo if I accurately understand the haiku.

03:53  

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