January 20, 2006

aftermath

moving quietly
so he’ll forget she's alive,
she sweeps up the glass.

8 Comments:

Blogger texas haijin said...

you are amazing.

23:08  
Blogger The Northernmost Jew said...

Good one. It says a lot in seventeen syllables.

02:31  
Blogger Eric said...

moving. well done.

07:21  
Blogger Vera Dennen said...

Love your choice of books in your profile. What a well rounded, feet on the floor women you must be. I am Vera, of ecoartist.blogspot.com and I don't play tag, so no tagging. Just stopped by from Valerie's house.

17:16  
Blogger whitney said...

this is tragically beautiful.

thank you for the comment.
it is well appreciated.

whitney

22:51  
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

a lot to think about -- I have added you on my blog
Andrew

23:52  
Anonymous Patricia said...

I love this! Good stuff. Keep it coming.

10:41  
Anonymous Chaya said...

It stopped my breath reading this.

11:49  

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